My soul is the waiter serving me at the Sky bar.
Factored into this exchange is duality.
Longing and loss crawl against my skin like jealous thieves picking my combination lock.
My shadow challenges my soul to a drinking contest.
Now the bar is minus a waiter.
Thanks so much for the mention on your Daily Prompt. I’m honored to be featured on your outstanding blog. Have a great night. Michele
beautiful
Thank you so much. I’m always seeking to improve and find answers and I’d love to know what you liked about this post. Blessings, Michele
Is the pieces of art you have photographed yours also those on your latest post? They are really beautiful and the poetry you chose goes well with them.
Hanne, yes, all the artwork is my own — unless otherwise stated. Experimenting with visuals and text in this way is a new form of expression for me. I am grateful for your appreciation.
Keep on experimenting. There something raw yet poetic about these pieces of art. A combination I absolutely love. Looking forward to follow the unfolding.
Hanne, thank you so much. ‘Raw yet poetic’ is a great compliment for me! Your description is the aesthetic I am aiming for. Blessings to you. Michele
Fantastic!
wow i am left speechless…line 2 especially…you are a beautiful poet. thank you for the comment you left on my blog. i will now be an avid reader of your blog…your mind, your poetry, your photography…it is all beautiful.
So wonderful to meet you here. Thank you for your kind words of appreciation, I feel we are kindred spirits. You made my day! I look forward to staying in touch. Michele
Wow. Really deep. It’s breathtaking!
Thank you. Wonderful to know that this poem moved you in some way.
Amazing. You’re an extraordinary writer.
Wow, thank you so much. For sure, my heart and soul was in that poem!
Yeah. It showed…. great job.
🙂 You do the same with your work. I can see that!
I put a password on the page and sent you the link in an email this morning. I will also send you a mail just with the links so hopefully that should do it!
I love your work, Michele. Thanks, by the way, for dropping by The Curmudgeon.
Gerry, it’s my pleasure to visit your blog. Thank you for your kind words. Lovely day to you.
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My shadow challenges my soul to a drinking contest… What a super line, great poetry. Who won? 🙂
Thanks Kieran! In all honesty, there were no winners 🙂
I shan’t ask what they were drinking then! 🙂
No, best not to… whatever it was, the poison was invisible! 🙂